Angel of My Heart

That's right, that will be the title for my new poem I wrote for the school magazine. I'll show you the poem before it's in the magazine. Take a look.

Angel of My Heart

God’s masterpiece that’s what she is

No words can be used to describe the beauty she has

A dark gloomy place turns colourful with her appearance

Nothing seems to be everything

Beautiful in and out

Maybe an angel she is

An angel that stops my heartbeats,

An angel that turns my world into another world,

An angel that shows money is valueless,

I truly adore her

The angel of my heart

©Vikneswaran Veerasundar

So, what do you think about it? Which is better? My previous poem or this?